Amore Immortale

See, I may write a thousand rhymes
With my lyrical tranquil art,
And weave thy name on threads of time
To melt thy ardent heart.

To please thy tender heart my dear,
I may sing a thousand songs,
That soothe for aye each trembling tear
And heal the antique wrongs.

But neither the lines nor melodic grace
Of saccharine songs in tune,
Can ever depict thy occult face
Beneath the idyllic moon.

And neither the words nor lyrical charms
In the waves of rhythmic sea,
Can ever express the love that comes
From me and goes to thee.

For it seems that I have loved to thee
In a countless modes and ways,
And we love with a love greater than we
Which is beyond the nights and days.

Which is beyond the diurnal moves my dear,
Of this seraphic baffling Sphere;
A love so young, a love so true
After thousand mystic years.

And it seems that all the potions deep
In the Earth’s eternal sea,
Carry for aye my secret ship
In the magic shores of thee.

For in every star and every place,
And every lyrical line;
I find thy tranquil mystic face
Ere the eyes of mine.

And with every breath and every beat,
In every purple year;
Through echoing woods and echoing streets
Thy silent voice I hear.

And thy fragrance so slow unfurls
The secrets of my breast,
Like guilded stones and sparkling pearls
As keys open the chests.

And it seems that I have loved to thee,
Yeah loved forever high!
For thousand moons and thousand springs
Under the endless sky.

And we have danced hand in hand
Amidst a thousand hearts,
And promised to straighten every bend,
And never ever to part.

So kiss to me, my fragrant rose,
The melody of my soul;
Let us break the chains of woes,
And blend for aye as whole.

And lock for aye our virgin bloods
With the iron gates of trust,
And sing forever, O sweet bird
With the hot rhythms of lust.

And neither death nor evil powers
Will dare to part our hearts,
For our love shall live in sacred flowers
Immortalized by arts!

60 Comments Add yours

  1. Beautiful writing Shayan. Keep them coming 👍🏻

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  2. calmkate says:

    so loving and far beyond your years … you have talent!

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    1. shayandas says:

      Thanks😊😊😊

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      1. calmkate says:

        my pleasure!

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      2. Dear Shayan🌹
        The tenderness and fragrance of the voice of love in your poetry caressed my soul. Thank you and bless you.
        ❤️Michele

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        1. Shayan Das says:

          Thank you so much for commenting. That’s so nice of you. Have a great day ahead 😊

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  3. Navin says:

    Well written Shayan….come again, are you a teen? I’m impressed!

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    1. Right Navin!!!!! totallly blows me away!

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      1. Navin says:

        Yeah…this tells a soul has no age…only a body has 😊

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        1. Sooo true!!! 💕❤️😘

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    2. shayandas says:

      Thanks😊😊😊

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      1. Navin says:

        You’re welcome.

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  4. Beautiful Shayan! Nice to meet you and thanks for the follow! I am now following you. 🙏 Cindy

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    1. shayandas says:

      Thanks a lot to you too 😊😊

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      1. You’re so welcome! And thank you!❤️

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  5. Whoa, this such a beautiful poem. Both romantic and pure

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  6. Beautiful writing. It brought to me a classic feel of romanticism. Loved it.

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  7. John32 says:

    Outstanding and most beautiful😍

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  8. Beautifully written! I love it. 😍

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    1. Thank you so much

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  9. I’m speechless. This is just amazingly touching, endearing, gripping, you name it. Just like the first one I commented. I loved the Gif, and you’re reciting it is just wonderful. Congrats! Keep rising!

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    1. Aww…Thank you so much for stopping by and commenting on my poem. It really means a lot to me 🤗

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  10. Doug says:

    You bring intensity to the atmosphere of the this poetic sphere. A thousand songs for a hidden face behind the idyllic hides sorrow for the ages. Young love is a mystery. Blue moons and purple years raise the fragrances of eternal souls. Sacred is love in the midst of time.

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    1. Thank you so much for stopping by and commenting on my post😊

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  11. Wonderful written! Thank you for sharing, and have a beautiful week! Michael

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    1. Thank you so much for commenting. Have a great week ahead😊

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  12. JanBeek says:

    Oh my! I am enthralled! The poem with its ABAB rhyme scheme and 4-3-4-3 meter captivated me on “paper” – but then your voice – oh your voice – brought the love off the paper and into my heart. You are gifted indeed – and so mature for your young years. I am in love! I want to crawl into the computer and hug you!!! ❤

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    1. Aww… Thank you so so much for this comment. It really means a lot to me. I’ll surely love to read from you too. Have a great day ahead. Hugs🤗

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      1. JanBeek says:

        Thank you for commenting so graciously. You have a great day ahead, too. God bless you! You are an amazing, talented young man. I am honored that you will take time to read my meager renderings. Thank you! ❤

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    1. Shayan Das says:

      Thank you🙏

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  13. Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    I JUST ADORE THIS RICHLY- FORTIFIED LOVE POEM !

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    1. Shayan Das says:

      Thank you so much ❤

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      1. YOU ARE WELCOME…SHAYAN!

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    1. Shayan Das says:

      Thank you🙏

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  14. Judith says:

    Lovely imagery!

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  15. Simply beautiful!

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    1. Shayan Das says:

      Thank you🙏

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  16. rothpoetry says:

    Very nicely done!

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    1. Shayan Das says:

      Thank you so much😊

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  17. I read this thrice. Amazing

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  18. Dera says:

    You employ a unique style to your poetry. Nice!

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  19. Aditi says:

    This is really very beautiful!!

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    1. Shayan Das says:

      Thanks a lot 🙏

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  20. Anand Bose says:

    Dear Shyan, Very eloquent use of imagery,

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    1. Shayan Das says:

      Thank you so much!

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