Brightest Stars(Haiku)

lucent silver stars
crimsoning atop the hills
brightests dwell in earth!

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  1. Anand Bose says:

    Yes your poem with Van Gogh’s Painting is so remarkable.

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    1. Thank you so much😊

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  2. Can you describe it Shayan?

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    1. Sure. This little poem in general deals with two kinds of stars. The stars in the first two lines represent the heavenly bodies and those in the last line represents the people who live eternally in the hearts of common folks for their noble deeds. No matter how bright the stars shine at night but their light will eventually perish one day and will soon be forgotten or be replaced by an alternative but the light of those people that shows ways to millions even after their earthly death will continue to rule the earth till the doomsday.

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  3. Plakshi Jain says:

    I think the starry night really adds more meaning to your haiku! Loved it 🙂

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    1. Thank you so much for stopping by and commenting on my post. 😊

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  4. Love this Starry Night

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    1. Thank you 🙏

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  5. dreamerr says:

    A lovely haiku. Could relate with it.

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    1. Thanks a lot❤

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  6. hgamma says:

    Stars how eyes in the
    Hearts touch gently lips and hands
    and mind in your soul

    Reply to: MR SHAYAN DAS

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    1. Thank you so much for stopping by and commenting on my post 😊

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      1. hgamma says:

        Ich möchte mich bei Ihnen bedanken, Sie haben mit Ihrem Poem die Vorlage gegeben.

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  7. Your meaningful haiku pairs well with Van Gogh’s famous painting. Love it! Have a great day, Shayan! ❤

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    1. Thank you so much for commenting 😊

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  8. “*Stars* present and represent millions of elements from above the Solar System-to-the
    *Stars* honoring super starz on the Hollywood-Walk-of-Fame.”
    _-Van Prince

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    1. Thanks for commenting😊

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  9. Aadya singh says:

    (◕ᴗ◕✿)

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  10. willedare says:

    This painting continues to inspire millions of us human beings long after Van Gogh’s death. Thanks for this poem (and your further explanation in the comments above…)

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    1. Shayan Das says:

      Thank you so much for commenting. Have a great day ahead😊

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  11. Hamish says:

    If we look hard enough we will see the shining light of stars out there in the universe and within our own hearts.

    Thank you for sharing. 💛

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    1. Shayan Das says:

      Thank you so much for commenting😊

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  12. corpus2020 says:

    hi, nice to read you.

    I write anytime my haiku’s too. I hope You can understand my verses with the translator.

    see you.

    https://corpus2020.wordpress.com/category/versi/

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    1. Shayan Das says:

      Thank you so much for commenting. I’ll surely read them with the help of google translate.

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      1. corpus2020 says:

        thank you for reading: I hope you will like they so much as I like yours. 🙂

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